One day, my mom decided to take me to Old Mans Cave for a hike. On the way there, we stopped at Walmart to get water and snacks. Once we got there, we walked around for about two hours before stopping to eat our snacks and replace the batteries in her camera. While we were stopped, she decided to tell me that she had a boyfriend and was planing on marrying him. I got mad and started walking faster than her so I wouldn’t have to talk to her. I regret it because me and my mom never talk now.
Mrs. Caudill
Old Man’s Cave is breathtaking and many of your readers would have no knowledge of it. It would be great if you inserted a hyperlink like this one to allow your readers to see just how beautiful it is.
https://thehockinghills.org/Old_Mans_Cave.htm